Re - kindled faith
As i sat on the sand,
In the darkness of the moonlit night;
Thoughts wavered, all across my mind.
I looked for the sun in the rising night,
Found none but gloom and plight;
Never once, never before has the dark been so bright.
The future and the past loomed before me:
But i knew not what to derive,
Hours had passed before i realised -
The sun was up and bright,
But still i could see from my mind's eye,
The darkness of the night.
I woke up and realised that -
The bad would pass us by;
All it needed was a little faith; in the Supernatural Spy.
a mediocre attempt at writing a poem(da 1st attempt)
so all u great poets out there.. do pardon moi...
7 comments:
bravo!
that was quite a first attempt, my dear. so proud of you. :D
he he he... thnx... well if u dun knw yet... ur my inspiration...
*shocked at her own thoughts*
i am? whoa...considering how gloomy this poem is, i dont knw whether to take it as a compliment or not... :p
btw svati, why dont you display our names instead of our links? it doesnt look nice otherwise
"never before has the dark been so bright"
i love it!! .... don wanna look at it as a first attempt..u shudve put dat line after d poem....makes ppl underestimate wat u have........
ANJU, thanx fr da suggestion...looked into it already n NIMS... get da point..its gloomy..ur smile is my inspiration... he he he..
all wat i can say is... i've lost another friend to the hands of poetry!!! i'll miss u svat!!!
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